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Yeah, I totally agree with listeningforthemuse. Great beginning, how you wanted to say something that would make her want you, but instead, you had to be that good friend and ...

Woo! This is really good. I'm easily addicted to such things so I demand you write more, for my life depends on it. No, not really. But you should definitely ...

Well, I am not one to complain about books. I'm easy to please, so most of the books that everyone is complaining about didn't bother me. However, I get bored ...

I am definitely pro-Stephenie. I love her writing-style and the twilight series. I love Edward and Bella and the Cullens. That is why it is such a big deal to ...

Is this a prologue to a story you're working on? Because if it's not, it needs to be. You should most definitely base a story on this. It was very ...

The most common thing to say about French class at the middle school was, "I hate the teacher, but I love the class." The thing I've come to realize is, ...

Whoa, powerful!!! First off..... corrections: No body likes him. should be nobody. readsa lot there needs to be a space No, thegirl Again, there needs to be a space. The ...

I ran down the hallway and down the steep stairs, and in my hurry, I carelessly let gravity take care of my descent. That is to say, I fell. Goodness, ...

I liked this. A lot. It was, in my opinion at least, easy to understand, but a tad bit predictable. But that's okay. I only found 3 grammatical errors, so ...

Oh my goodness, this was superb! You did an excellent job of showing how mentally ill he was. I would've loved for him to have a tiny rant about his ...

No, I don't know why anyone didn't want to review it. It definitely wasn't because it wasn't any good, because it was. Really good. I know that this is such ...

Whoa, this was really amazing! This is my first critique, so I hope I do it well. The upsides: *The ending was really good. I felt everything Jesse was feeling, ...

Bravo! I really liked this, and even if the title didn't say so, I could totally tell that it was from a personal experience (even if it wasn't.) All of ...

This was very good. I could see it very clearly in my head. Especially the tears part. She knows that everyone thinks they are tears of joy, but they aren't. ...

Hmm... kind of reminds of a teacher. One that is very intuitive and abstract and knows everything about her students. The kind of teacher you could have deep conversations with ...